I chose this picture because this is what I think Colin looks like as a ten year old, also he said he likes candy so I thought this image was perfect for him. |
I think the thing that makes this story good is that Orlean used so many great details to describe Colin, his friends and what goes on in his daily life that it brought the story to life for me while I was reading it. The quotes that she used also made the story a better read for me because it wasn't just paragraph after paragraph, she added the Q & A affect to the story that she used while talking to Colin.
Something that also makes it a good story is that she goes farther with her details, like the sign on the black board in Colin's classroom and also the conversation between Colin and his friend about Street Fighter II Championship Edition. My favorite quote from the story is, "The best candy is Skittles and Symphony bars and Crybabies and Warheads. Crybabies are great because if you eat a lot at once you feel so sour." After reading this quote I legitimately laughed out loud at it. I think that all the quotes about Colin's world views were the best part of the story.
Orlean approached the story by using an anecdotal type story, which is her telling a story of how her life with Colin would be if they were to get married, I think that it was a good way to start the story because it gives information about Colin before she goes into the rest of the story. I think that Orlean wrote a great story and went about doing it in the right way.